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Self-portrait

Pentax K-5 

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Other works:
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Image size
769x800px 619.24 KB
Make
PENTAX
Model
PENTAX K-5
Shutter Speed
1/80 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 24, 2013, 4:50:05 AM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Okay, first of all I'm not really in position to be giving critiques or anything but it's good for practice and such, right?

Anyways, I really adore this whole piece. The colours are wonderfully vibrant, and some of the details are really amazing, like where the plant pokes into her skin. That's just a random details and things like that are what I love. The eye is simply gorgeous as well, which I don't really need to go into detail about. The whole thing is fairly surreal and original, as are many of your works, and they are always a pleasure to see.

The only things I would point out perhaps include the eyebrow. I just feel as though a more pronounced eyebrow would have a stronger impact, thought I don't know if you purposely made it sort of dusty-looking or whether it was just an insignificant part in the photo. Also, the eye makeup is sort of clumpy. Now, as a female, I definitely understand that makeup it stupid and hard to make smooth, plus you might have intended it this way, so that was just another point. Finally I would just take notice to the lips, which look rather flat or fake, maybe that's just a result of editing or the lipstick but more details in the lips or something is what I would suggest, personally.

Thanks for sharing your work! It's always so beautiful and interesting.